Brilliant video. I commented before and told you to build the storyline up more slowely and you did that now really well. The talking to Lisa on the phone makes it more understandable and the black and white effect and the camera shaking at the silent walk is really good as well. Well done!
Wow guys, since you last asked for criticism comments, this has gotten so much better! Love the fact that the music starts a lot earlier. Seriously. The music is really good and works really well with your footage. Good work! :)
Hey guys, I thought your film beginning was really good! I especially like the music because it makes the atmosphere of the film really intense and compliments the genre. I also liked how the point of view shots from whatever was stalking your main character were edited differently and in black and white. WELL DONE! (:
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Brilliant video. I commented before and told you to build the storyline up more slowely and you did that now really well.
The talking to Lisa on the phone makes it more understandable and the black and white effect and the camera shaking at the silent walk is really good as well.
Well done!
Wow guys, since you last asked for criticism comments, this has gotten so much better! Love the fact that the music starts a lot earlier. Seriously. The music is really good and works really well with your footage.
Good work! :)
Lisa Mitchell x
Hey guys,
I thought your film beginning was really good! I especially like the music because it makes the atmosphere of the film really intense and compliments the genre. I also liked how the point of view shots from whatever was stalking your main character were edited differently and in black and white.
WELL DONE! (:
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