This afternoon in class we were given the opportunity to give and recieve feedback on our main tasks. The main thing that people seemed to pick up on was that the first shot as it was too long. Below is some of the feedback that we were given.
Kim – Lisa is wearing school uniform & opening shot is too long & more titles
Simon – Build up the tension slower than we have
Sultan – First shot is too long but there is good use of effects
Tess – No girl at the end of the film & first shot too long
Mrs Downes - Needs some sound at the beginning, there is talking in the background some shots that needs to be cut out & at the end there is a wiggle in the fingers that needs to be cut out.
We have taken on board all of this information and we are very grateful for it as we are using it to improve the footage that we currently have.
Written by Gregor Sharp
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