Kim wrote: When Vidur pulled up his sleeves the lighting was different to what it was before and after, which made it seem like it had been filmed on different days which was a continuity error. Other than that it was good.
First of all: good work for a preliminary task. I don't worry so much about the lighting as Kim does, because you have filmed it at the same day, it is just a problem with the cameras. The fact that the sound is not working on my school computer of course is not so good, but it might not be your fauklt if it works on others. As Vidur enters the building andf walks around tghe corner the shot doesn't show his head , just his body from his legs to his back. The idea of an low angle shot is nice, but the shot itsself has to be more clear. Do you want to show his foots or his head, but you don't want to show his "bum", do you.
aHmEd (part of sHaMeDia tEaM): there is no sound, this could of been an technical fault, even then i found the editing was not in good timing, e.g. when vidur sits down the the next shot, he is silent then he looks at camera and then speaks, they shoud of cut that bit out until he actually starts speaking. Other than that its great.
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Kim wrote: When Vidur pulled up his sleeves the lighting was different to what it was before and after, which made it seem like it had been filmed on different days which was a continuity error. Other than that it was good.
First of all: good work for a preliminary task. I don't worry so much about the lighting as Kim does, because you have filmed it at the same day, it is just a problem with the cameras. The fact that the sound is not working on my school computer of course is not so good, but it might not be your fauklt if it works on others. As Vidur enters the building andf walks around tghe corner the shot doesn't show his head , just his body from his legs to his back. The idea of an low angle shot is nice, but the shot itsself has to be more clear. Do you want to show his foots or his head, but you don't want to show his "bum", do you.
aHmEd (part of sHaMeDia tEaM): there is no sound, this could of been an technical fault, even then i found the editing was not in good timing, e.g. when vidur sits down the the next shot, he is silent then he looks at camera and then speaks, they shoud of cut that bit out until he actually starts speaking. Other than that its great.
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